Thursday, December 23, 2010

The influence of your social relations

Have the relations you have established with your classmates benefited you to become a better writer? and how do you think the relations you have established with your classmates have benefited you to become a better writer?

18 comments:

Ricardo Muñoz said...

Wauuuu \ WWoowww

well, hapi nyu yeaa!

Sometimes "WE" speak in a foreign language, you know, and with this practice we are able to get our ideas more fastly even we are fasting (because some clases are in teh morning).

right now I think it's important the point of view from another classmate because to us our work seems perfect; even the best student has doubts.

so i think i've got an inprovment in my writting and as always there are dubts, we can ask our proffesor for advice.

I'll say something else later.

cristian said...

hey prof.... we were in vacations.... lol well i want to say thanks to all my classmates because they really help me with those tasks that i didn't understand or sometimes with some writting problems i have.. and if i'm a good friend i'm going to have all support i need to write, first i have to be confident with myself and trust in my classmates

Julian's English III Writing Project said...

Well,in my personal case, yes; the relations I have established with some of my classmates has benefited my learning in writing.
I think that you can learn from each other, maybe you are good in some aspect your mate is not and he's good in something you're not, so, it's a mutual benefit, an interchange of knowledge; in the particular case of writing for example: the acquire of vocabulary, ideas or grammar are some of the things I usually share with my classmates and have helped me to get better in this aspect of learning.

Camilo Restrepo said...

They definitely have, we need the experience from other people to work up in the class. And the more confortable you feel working with your classmates, the better you will write.

As you know your strengths and weaknesses
you may know the same from your friends, and be helped by them based on that.

Carula said...

you become a better writer when you hear the ideas of the world , in this case my classmates were a good element in my writing process, with their advices and help i got many ideas to create a good essay.

Gigi's Project said...

When we work with another classmate it's a learning becuase we can share ideas, feelings and expressing what everyone want to say provides our classmate is agree that's perfect.

So i think that it was a great experience since in some moments we have to tolerate like thinking my classmate and it is very interesting and at the same time we learning new vocabulary through them.

Yurany's Group said...

HELLO TEACHER...JEJEJEJEJEJE.......HAPPY NEW YEAR......OK...I THINK THAT THE TEAMWORK IT'S VERY IMPORTANT IN CLASS, BECAUSE THIS ALLOW TO STRENGTHEN THE RELATIONS AND THE FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN THE CLASSMATES. IN MY CASE,WHEN I WAS WORKING WHIT MY FRIEND, I COULD LEARN MANY THINGS, FOR EXAMPLE: VOCABULARY, EXPRESSIONS, ETC. AND ALSO, I COULD SEE DIFERENTS POINTS OF VIEW. AND FOR MY, THE TEAMWORK IT'S VERY EASY BECAUSE I THINK I AM VERY PATIENT AND UNDERSTANDING, AND I RESPECT THE THOUGHTS,THE OPINIONS OF OTHERS.

Natalia Henao said...

well, I think that everyday we learn of other people nwe things so the relations that I have established with my classmates have benefited a lot in my development as a writer. My classmates have taught me vocabulary, but also grammar and some structures or ways to say or write different the things.
People have contribute to become a better writer because I learn that their point of view is so important and always there is a constant interchange of knowledge.

Dianis said...

The relation with my classmates has benefited to me because when I have a question or I don't understand the lesson, my classmates like Cristian, Caro and Gigi help me and I have learned to make structures for make essay and day to day I have been better writer and I understand the way for make it.

I think that the relation with my classmates has helpped me because when Pablo decide to work in couples so my classmate has a new ideas and I can share it and also I can give my ideas, so with It method Is possible to be a good writer.

RODRIGO said...

i think it's a good way to correct each other, but it really didn't help me so much, because we didn't work together most of the time, the essay was something i did by myself, i never asked my mates for helping, and i think each one was interested in his or her own work.

edinson eduado pabon said...

hi there.well, before I write something I'd like to thank all my partners for evrerything, but after all I am totally sure they didn't help me to improve my skills in writing,it was something I did by myself and if I improve in something it just depended on my own,I think that the only way to get better the way we write is by practicing instead of expecting that others correct our mistakes, in fact, I bet that if we practice everyday we could overcome any kind of situation.

jonhdrocks said...

I think that my classmates´s opinions and thoughts are very important, because each one has different points of view that can help us to improve our writing tasks.

In my case, those academic supports have helped me a lot. I have adquired more vocabulary, expessions and something else...

I am very glad sharing knowledge with my classmates, all of them are kind, smart and pretty; and what can I say about the professor, he has been very patient and a good guide.

Thank´s to all... Blessings!

diegomorillo said...

i think that the work of a writer most of the time is alone. The writer is a lonely man who figure out the world since his bureau and begin to write all that his spirit dictate him.Most of the writers are lonely men who has consecrated his live to the letters and they have forgoten his personal life.In my case i prefer write alone and i think that is a work more individual than in group, i have learned by myself.

Ricardo Muñoz said...

wawawa it's me again.

Now i'll share what I need to share in order to answer those questions.

Well, I was expecting to know which are my classmates' opinion about the work in this semester which is about to finish for our sake.

in other words, what my classmates said in short words was "Yes, I've got an improvement in my Writting process, I'm happy ^o^"

As for I (the evil), I even am not able to say what they did say, so as you are thinking something like "What on earth is talking this gon?" I'll express something folling:

thought #1: It's pretty obviously that we were working on texts which they were about Writting and Reading, BUT was that enough to have got an improvement?, and when we were working on "keep in mind those", to all of us it was pretty awfully, wasn't it?

I must say if I improved some, it was because I was working out of class; a class' blog it's a good idea, but this is very far away our lives, I was thinking "Well, instead of class blog, why not a facebook class?" most of us we'd be commenting every time, even Jaunary 1st when we were so drunk, anyway.

thought nambaa tuw: I want to make to my classmates notice that if we want to be exellent in English, we must take a greatest part in our learning process, I mean, "No, that F*+king proffesor is so bad in 'its' work, I don't want to learn 'its' lousy english", which makes me say this thought in a simple sentence that you can understand easily: "To be good at english is not professor's job, it's our, capiche?" if you don't take advantage of natives and non-natives english speakers, "Ustè' 'ta en la olla" (morillo's speech)

I've forgoten 4's thought, however, this semester was short i know, but i think we could do more than we did.

To finish: Sir Acosta, I think you've got a doog idea, but you didn't make work it very well, I mean, you're our teacher, you had to comment in my blog, and not only in my blog, in all of us.


I haven't seen any post from you.

So, guys, don't spare much time, we're almost in #4 semester and we even don't know how to express before a society.

I like all my classmates, but we have take this seriously right now. (Todos mis compañer@s me caen bien, pero ya es hora de tomar esto seriamente)

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PS: I don't hate french anymore, actually like it.(ya no odio el francés, de hecho me gusta)

writing project yenny said...

I THINK THE INTERACTION AND GOOD SOCIAL RELATION WITH THE WHOLE WORLD IS THE KEY TO BE THE BEST EVRY DAY. YOU ALWAYS HAVE SOMETHING TO LEARN FROM OTHER PERSON, IN MY PARTICULAR CASE I THINK THAT THEY HAVE BEEN AN IMPORTANT FACTOR IN MY LEARNING PROCESS,OVERALL IN WRITING HABILITY SO, WHEN I HAVE DOUBTS, I ASK TO THEM AND THEY ALWAYS HELP ME FOR ALL THAT THANK YOU DEAR CLASSMATES AND TEACHER BECAUSE YOU ARE IMPORTANT ELEMENT IN OUR LEARNING PROCESS!!!

English class Saint Catherine Labouré said...

ok....... every day we learn something about any person....
the social relations with my classmates are good and they always help me when i have troubles. I have been helpped with some troubles for my classmates, because when i didn't understad a topic, they were trying to help me, for me they have been fundamental in my learned process...... I have learned much of them.
I think that your help has been fundamental, because without them, my process does not good..... the vocabulary that they have is big and sometimes I learn about this....

Anonymous said...

Well...Have the relations you have established with your classmates benefited you to become a better writer? Yes, the colaboration from diferent people help to improve...It's to say All the things you can learn from others always will be gain.

To learn to hear different opinions, thoughts, to have diverses ideas in your mind that I don't know how developed it, they are some things that you learn when you are in a process like this and when you have the opportunity to share with many people who are looking for the same goal...

I feel that I have improved maybe this advance don't see for others but in my mind in my brain in my head I can perceive it and I consider it was thanks to help from my classmates and teacher.

Vico said...

I think that I become a better writer in the last semester, definitely have this type of relationsips whit my classmates that only are not just in the classroom, we've become a real friends almost a family with a few, so we can help to improve each other, the only interest is that everyone in the group A of
3th semester become in an excellent writer. You become in a better writer because when you're with you classmates you learn to listen the other opinions and the corrections, so at the same time that you express your self and listen other points of view you're learning new vocabulary and new estrategies that will become you into a better writer, thats the way in wich I improve my writing. Thanks all of you for listen and helps each other to improve our English.